LW4 – 1. I like the way the story is going. You are doing great pulling all the characters in. I also like you put Danials online handle next to his name. That will help in keeping the characters straight.
Ummm what is an omega custom? That’s going to be interesting…
Maybe because the lights were on when Daniel had gotten naked and was getting ready to undress him or expected him to do the same. I’m figuring he’s accustomed to undressing with a hook up in the dark instead of a lighted room/area, but he excused himself to go to the bathroom.
Interesting. Leaves a lot of room to take this story anywhere you want. I like it.
Good introduction to who Danial (Cuke)is and how he knows Tiger (Bounce).
LW4 – 1. I like the way the story is going. You are doing great pulling all the characters in. I also like you put Danials online handle next to his name. That will help in keeping the characters straight.
Ummm what is an omega custom? That’s going to be interesting…
It’s going very well.
“Her glasses falling half way off her face…”
Now I’m her laughing, “dress up as a ninja”…wow.. ” Tiger escaping through the bathroom window like a ninja…
Perfecto.
Nice start. Can’t wait to find out why Bounce climbed out that window!
Maybe because the lights were on when Daniel had gotten naked and was getting ready to undress him or expected him to do the same. I’m figuring he’s accustomed to undressing with a hook up in the dark instead of a lighted room/area, but he excused himself to go to the bathroom.
Wow.. this is going to be a good book.
It progressing well this far.
Thanks for the access to pre-read.
The part when Daniel saw his brother Hinter on the beach is written twice.
I don’t think this one will be a Rom-Com.
I’m loving story.
Hunter will do something that will not fo well for Daniel.